The fourth line is silver edged steel.
If I were the kind of person to go in for tattoos, this would hold a place of honor. As it is, I burn it into memory.

Delicious.

Odd and cute. Has a defiant or maybe a desperate flair to it.

Thank you guys!

I keep trying to compose commentary on this display, but I can’t get past my own experience as the employee waiting to clean up a mess. In that you are spot on. Extremely uncomfortable place to be.

Wow- this is so candid and poignant without being too “wallow-y”, and in addition you made it supremely effective in only 11 short lines. I’m so impressed with this, really great work.

The last line indicates a character that is playful yet observant of the character of others. I like the complexity. The format is great too. Awesome work!