Very, very bizarre. Okay, the comment about painkillers explains a lot. It feels rather loose in places, which kind of works and kind of had me scratching my head.
Fantastic, apocryphal, vernal explosion: the title is perfect.
Reading it is an interesting experience: very much like parsing something in a dream, where individually the sentences are fragmentary and muddled, but a very strong narrative sense still remains.
This project of your is a brave and interesting thing to do, and I think that, overall, it has certainly been worth the effort.
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