I need to read this a few more times to fully soak it in. The sentiment is absolutely clear, and one I deeply appreciate, while maintaining a specificity that keeps me on the outside of full understanding.

Beautiful as always, but extremely special. Henry James will be here before you know it. I love the luster line.

Thank you both for the comments!

Very loose and ethereal. I struggled through most of it, but it’s a lovely sentiment.

Thanks for the comment, THX. You’ve mentioned more than once recently that my writing has been rather loose- I’ll work on tightening it up!

Odd, but engaging. As the others have noted, the writing works against full understanding, but the sentiment is very clearly there, so a success on those terms.

Interesting title. Wasn’t it Henry James who had the ‘ponderously warm way of saying nothing in infinite sentences’? This is warm, and the sentences are pretty lengthy but certainly saying something, so that’s wide of the mark, I think.