Firmly in the ‘mysterious amnesic’ genre. like trying to pull reflections out of a pond is nicely descriptive of evanescent memory, and echoes the title in a satisfying way, whereas the sensation of insects crawling across my grave. is suitably horrible and vivid.

Cool moment and very nicely told. I liked the scattering of random intact memories.

Wow! This had me shuddering from the insects and questioning what had happened to the girl to defeat her so. The memory loss was a surprise and I loved your description.