JonB

Even more vividly, and viscerally described than the last one; a pretty convincing portrait of a psychopath.

You could perhaps make part 1 more explicit in terms of what is going on, because as it is, it stands alone without much connection to the succeeding instalments – although I appreciate that you’re building up to the big finish.

All in all, an entertaining read.

• Posted over 5 years ago.