Great work developing the two sisters’ relationship here. The dialogue is the driving force here, as it should be, and the choice of words gives each line weight.

Great exchange here. I love the very real feeling bit about being offended by the insinuation and rumor…even if they are at least in part true. Nice touch.

Nicely done! Ooooh Acalle is beginning to irk me even though she has an awesome name…

A nicely structure exchange, with enough information given to infer the rest of the storyline (which I’ve sort of forgotten, reading this in the usual, piecemeal way).