Ooooh. This puts a different spin on things. I like it.

… XD I love this!

I like that while the mother is fighting back tears, she doesn’t just give up. She’s ready to fight for what’s hers and by the end she appears more angry than afraid. Nice job!

Vain. Unless it’s blowing about in the wind.

I live the descriptive work in this piece: it’s easy to imagine the scene playing out in front of the observer’s eyes and to see the players take in the situation. Ib love how the husband starts slowly’ but he gets there in the end.