Yayy! What a good story. I think we’d have to deprive you of two letters or maybe more to put a crimp in your creativity.

Ha ha ha. That sounds about right.

Great story. I enjoy the descriptions and the strong sense of their daily life in such a short piece of writing.

It’s mostly devoid of “a” but for one tiny article, “slug of a man”.

Aah, I didn’t see that. Have to ding you for that, big guy … sorry!