You know, weird afterlife seems to be a favoured theme among the Ficly-writing community(myself included), so welcome to the club.

This is quite vividly imagined,with some memorable descriptions. Certainly feels like a story going somewhere, wherever that might be. There’s a bit of wayward grammar throughout, but doesn’t detract too much from the overall story.

Thanks JonB! Indeed afterlife is an interesting theme, hope you like the future of the history.
Sorry for the grammatical errors :( Im from argentina, we don’t speak english here, so what I know is from school learning, I will try to improve in these details :)

Your English is a hell of a lot better than my Spanish, so hats off to you.