Alright! I didn’t place the culture until I’d read the last word. Makes it a more engrossing read, a cool idea.

Great job! Your description of the setting is well done through your character’s inner thoughts. Some of the grammar was clunky, which messed with me a bit, but I see that English is not your first language so I won’t hold it against you. Seriously – great job for not using the letter A.

Thanks, I tried to get into the writing style of HP Lovecraft, wich might explain a bit of the the clunkyness. (I’m not very good at it yet)