Rather gripping and well structure scene – the familiar, cinematic ‘helpless patient unable to communicate danger to well-meaning carers’ device is effectively used here. Some real momentum building in this story.

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Okay, so he can’t stand that ex-friend, and yet he can’t warn them even he wanted to do one last nice thing. He can’t stop it. What makes this interesting is that it forces him to really consider if he would “wish that on his worst enemy” or not. In this case, is worst enemy is an ex-friend.