Please, explain to me how this was made to be intentional? (facepalm) (rubs temples in confusion) >.<

But again, very interesting twist! xD

Oh, wait. Disregard my previous comments. after reading this several times I think (keyword being “Think”) I understand this now. God, it’s a horror show trying to pick through your mind. :)

and do realize that it is now (checks watch) uh, 3:30 AM so be aware that I take no responsibility for any spelling errors or for that matter, whether any of this makes any sense at all.

Hee hee, comments at 3:30 AM are fun!

I was going for ‘intentional’ like he wanted to set up the perfect proposal; that there was a reason they went through the stress, and it was a beautiful reason.

You will get to know me through time. I don’t usually write the sappy lovey-dovey stuff. :) This piece just led me there. I really wanted to throw in another twist! I just didn’t find the place for one.

I’m not the type for that either. Like you saw, immediately I had to put these two in some sort of danger :) A perfect, one night camping trip with a happy ending wasn’t in my agenda. I love suspense and danger, so when I write, I give my characters (And my readers) a ride of a lifetime throughout the story.

Well, we can torture them much more.. heh.

Yes. Let’s!

Oh, the best laid plans for a proposal.

Keep it simple, I say.

Fun times.

Well, that was unexpected! Sweetly written, especially in terms of painting very well her level of insecurity so that the ending has more punch.