aww.. but there is a time to mourn, and a time to live.

Yes, yes there is :)

Oh my, your last line is brilliant.

Tiny note: “envelop” is the verb; “envelope” is the thing you put letters in.

I love the way you’re conveying the second-by-second progress of the scene and building the emotional mood at the same time. As I said, the last line leaves me panting for breath. Nicely done.

Haha Ethel thanks – auto correct on my phone. Fortunately those days are fewer and farther between. Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it.