Love. This.
This is nice. The first stanza and possibly the second, are a bit Poe-esque to me.
Poetry has become one of my favorite methods of written expression.
Arson?
Interesting interpretation, Elsha. I can see how you would conclude that.
The first and last stanzas are gorgeous, although the syntax in the middle verse is a little mismatched, considering how elegant the rest is dictated. I suppose it might just be my disagreeing with colloquialisms today.
I’m not completely satisfied with the second stanza either, but it communicated what I was trying to say.
Lastande Sarie
Cariad Ceffyl
Jae
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Jae
inky blue
Jae