A nice blend of rhyme and non-rhyming discourse. I think you may have meant ‘immersed’ in the last line.

You’ve brought up a vital point. Free verse is easier to write for those who struggle against rigid poetic structures. I find such constraints an enjoyable challenge because it forces me to reconsider how to convey my intended meaning.

Indeed I did, thank you. Auto Correct can be ones nemesis. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you

I prefer the more rigid poetic structures for the challenge they present as well.