Lovely ode to someone gone. Last stanza starts with a duplicate use of ‘war’. I think the second one is supposed to be was? Very effective flow and idea in this one.

Eras of my life – and the people in them – are connected to music, sometimes in ways that make the music difficult to revisit. Reading an account such as this reminds me of the experience. I especially appreciate how the two “voices” ultimately coincide at the end, echoing the line from the beginning. Beautiful.

Thanks for the comments! I’ve fixed the error Dr. Tim spotted.

This brought a year to my eye. Quite Lovely! Music is Poetry- with or without words. You have captures this quite well here. This particular piece hit me quite deeply.
Music does attach itself to memories- often to our dismay
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I think this is my favourite thing I’ve recently written

I really like the way this is structured, alternating between the feelings evoked by a piece of music and a description of the music itself.