This is what happens when you can sleep at 4 am- and running on only 4 hrs of sleep ;)

Really fun cadence and overall attitude/voice to this one. I enjoyed it!

Thanks!!

There’s only one line I don’t like: My mind won’t stop,I wanna shout just because it’s a rather abrupt end to the stanza.
Otherwise I think it’s a sweet and funny little poem, accurately depicting sleeplessness with a touch of humour. Brava!

Haha Inky- that is exactly the feeling I get though when my mind is racing with too many thoughts and I don’t have control of the remote ;)