These short, abruptly complete thoughts are so very much like the twitching motions of a bird. Yet the same grace which a bird world in flight is also present. This glimpse into how a scavenger might peruse its day is masterfully achieved.

This is Amazing! I felt like a crow or a raven by the end of this. It through me right into the image as though I was on the inside looking thru the eyes of the bird. Bravo!

Carrion are usually considered foul creatures but you’ve made them seem playful and childlike. It’s a piece very accepting of the natural order of things, and I love the rhyme and lyricism.

It took me a few lines to figure this out and when I did I was amazed that I liked it! I agree with inky blue’s comment. We don’t often think of carrion (vultures in this case?) with pleasure, but I enjoyed seeing the world from his perspective.

I agree with the above comments. I enjoyed the playful perspective you’ve given your vultures. Road kill is like a party for them!