Wow. This was really intense and put me on a rollercoaster and an emotional one at that. You started the ball and did not let it stop.
The cold chill vs the hot sun was a beautiful metaphor. The idea that reality is harsh and cold but your mind is a paradise of warmth. This strikes me and I grow curious which I love!
Fantastic job on characterization and the ending. I was caught by surprise.
gafroel