I so enjoyed this! I didn’t know what to expect from the first sentences, but I like how it developed. You described his feelings and the frustration quite well. I especially loved the " fist he didn’t remember making"!
I am always excited when I stumble upon your stories! (I swear all the comments just happen)
I really really loved this piece. The world was established so well—so quickly. The image of what world I was in—with ogres and whining trees—came in full color and I loved it. The story was soft yet it was gruesome.
You know how to create things RQ and I have my eye on you, you’re a really good fucking writer.
(I don’t give out 5/5s as usually as you think—you’re just that good)
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