I have no idea what they are in a stalemate over. I almost want it to be the girl instead of some sort of secret identity or sci-fi thing.

This was definitely cute.

These two characters have a great dynamic that somehow makes me feel like they’ve been friends forever and this predicament just needs better explaining. And I love that! You really managed to leave this to interpretation, as you can see Elsha is also debating whether its sci-fi or something dramatic. I read it a lot more simply!

I love that!

So great job! I really like the tone and the banter. However, the mystery is slightly your downfall—what is happening?