I had great plans for this, and what came out was not that awesome. Oh well.

I find it hard to write great plans into such a short space and still maintain the details I wish to include.
I enjoyed this story, nicely done.

I really like this and I think it still has a lot of potential. It reminds me a little of Bicentennial Man with a little bit of Hugo mixed in.

That’s really sad. I kinda see Vincent Price and Johnny Depp without the love interest or a (not quite) happy ending. Immortality will suck for intelligent machines….