Just the like the original—I’m so confused. And that is what makes this piece excellent!
Somehow you’ve managed to make me read it three times in order to piece together what was happening and within those reads I kept putting together more and more.
The very subtle detail sets up the twist at the end very nicely. I thought it added to the quality of the piece.
I also feel satisfied, like just enough happened in the story to keep me wanting a sequel and it is excellent enough that I might have to write it myself if no else does!
I enjoyed this—great sequel, great addition, fantastic writing!
gafroel