Very sad. It’s not a typical moment for a fantasy story, as the hero usually wins the desperate battle. Nicely told, a moment within a larger setting that stands on its own without needing all the rest explained.

Interesting!

The dialogue gave off very important tidbits of information which is essential to world building and you did a great job!

I’m curious as to the different species and their interaction and I’m even intrigued at the thought of evil winning—if only temporary.

I loved it!