Great character development (although you got the names confused! Martin is the father, Henry is the child) and the added mystery definitely got me thinking a little. Maybe I’ll sequel, but as usual, great job!
Great character development (although you got the names confused! Martin is the father, Henry is the child) and the added mystery definitely got me thinking a little.
Maybe I’ll sequel, but as usual, great job!
Oops on the names. I switched them around now so hopefully they are correct.
Foreshadowing the possibility of a happy ending; nice. Seasoned with the surprise that Dad likes the boyfriend as a human being.