They’re out there waging a never-ending war for your trust and affection. You’ve just been held captive for some years. I really dig this piece and hope to read more from you.
First line: An not A, last line in first paragraph: Very, not Vary, (the second very is correct) This seems very personal. Trust is difficult to give out once you’ve been betrayed, however that is what it takes to love again. You can’t be loved if you don’t allow yourself to be loved.
I like this a lot and can relate both to the feelings after divorce and the people watching. It’s one of my favorite things to do. I wonder though, should twenty-six be capitalized?