Beautiful sentiment, although it’s not the healthiest way to live your life, chasing “what if”’s.

For me, personally, the rhythm and rhyme are confusing, and detract from the narrative, but all in all, it’s something entirely relateable. I can think of many people in my life who I’d like to rewind with.

Thank you Inky. I’ve gone back and tweeked it. I think it’s better.

I can’t put my finger on the changes but I know it feels a lot smoother, and I love the sound of the second verse.

;) thanks!