This is a prose poem slash performance poem in my head, but take it as you will.

I read this and was hooked right away, and I loved the last paragraph which left me wanting more. I could picture all of this vividly and I really enjoyed your insightful portrayal of vulnerability.

Beautifully written as always – so full of emotion and raw humanity. Crying can be so cathartic and I think the second paragraph put that across really well: the detachment you feel when all the emotion has been drained away.

This was beauty in word form. Excellent stuff Blue.

inky, you are so sensitive.

You guys are fantastic. This poem means a lot to me and I’m so glad you like it