I’m noticing a lot of red and blood themes in your last 2 entries. Care to enlighten? Oh it’s good don’t get me wrong, but I’m wondering if theres a not-so-subtle kind of imagery here. Bravo nonetheless!

hey that’s a really interesting observation. i wasn’t actually aware of it when i was writing them. it might just be laziness – i tend to fall back on bloody imagery because it’s so easy yet so vivid. still, maybe i need a chat with my subconscious lol.

Very nice piece here. I love the enjambment of the line “You’re drop-dead/
Gorgeous, girl.” It’s very powerful and gives a double meaning to this poem in just the use of the ENTER button. I also love the flow of this poem; it reads very easily.