gah! this has me at the verge of tears! i can not stand for any prequels or sequels for i fear my tiny little heart will be shattered into a billion tiny pieces!

but the writing is awesome!

Delicious story.

Perhaps the wrong choice of words….

That was amazing. All the characterization and storytelling in so few lines, the descriptions, just beautiful.

Amazing what you’ve done here, it even has the ring of truth. Good Job.

It’s such a clever idea, and such a strangely and sadly believable hope laid out in those first two lines.

Brilliant.

Awesome way to use the lines!
how can anyone top this?

What a brilliant and emotional response to the challenge. Bravo!

This is very moving, and it feels like there’s a lot of space for a story so compact. Does that make sense?

What I mean to say is: Well done!