wanted to add a prequel/sequel but didn’t want to tamper with such a nice story. very moving.

Combining two most classical romantic elements and making a folklore story out of them is an excellent idea. This is the most romantic description of the tides I have ever seen.

Bravo.

This is an excellent folk tale! It should be made into a children’s book.. not to confuse them, but the enlighten and entertain them.

This is fantastic. I agree with Elsha.. :)

Wow. That was a great story.
If you don’t mind, I sequeled something that follows the line of thought. :D

Born under a full moon also. Love the allegory and the myth.