hahahahaahha! that is hilarious! great job.

Hey, have you been following me around?? Just kidding. Great story!

OOOOOOH! Don’t eat the toast! Gross. poor grandma.

lol NASTY! hahaha

Terrific story. If you can handle the double entendre, keep them coming.

Giggled, and then grossed out.

Keep this man away from playgrounds.

Twisted and good.

Jeff, c’est moi.

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…Ew.

Hilarious, though. Because, you know, genitalia’s funny. Good writing.

BuAHHAHAHAHA! Dear lord, help. It’s the scene from Yes Man all over again! Little toasties run AWAAY! I’m so grossed out I can’t even stop masturba- I mean laughing.. O_O EWWW. the cereal isle?? oh yeaay. That captain crunch. MMM! Goodlookin on a pillow of crisp!

HAHA never expected that! but i wouldnt use that toaster anymore! thanx for your participation in my first challenge!

Bwuahahahahahaha! I was with Blossom Ruoquen we we read this story… we looked at each other…. and BUSTED up laughing! This was very…disturbing, but quite entertaining at the same time.

LMFFAO!

I honestly thought there was going to be a reference to the grandmother’s impaired eyesight at some stage, but this made me laugh a lot, especially because the rules of the game meant I knew the line I was looking for.

Your writing is really nice…I’ll watch you, I think.

Very hilarious, made me laugh out loud. I agree with all the others that left you input. Great slice of life.

remind me not to ever eat toast again

i laughed out loud a the evidence in the toaster. good work

Hahaha! If you just look at the first line separately, even that’s golden!