Comments on Death by ElshaHawk (LoA)

THX 0477

Jarring switch, but I’ll give you credit for the boldness of the move, taking our rather silly excursion into such a dark and serious place.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Kevin Lawver

I see what you did there… It’s like a little sidebar trip down memory lane with the Grim Reaper. I like it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Stovohobo

Nice look into Death’s consciousness. It doesn’t keep quite the same darkly comedic style as the others—it’s just dark—but that works pretty well with Death itself. Twisty flashback too.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 3 out of 5
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

pretty neat… only thing that bugs me is the dimension thing: we’re actually in the 4th because of the whole time element.
Other than that intriguing. I still have to read the others, though…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Textual Phoenix

Wow! How can I describe this?

THX and Kevin’s initial stories were a nice hot tub, easy to relax and joke around in.

This is the bucket of ice water dumped on you by your fiancee. Extremely jarring, but oddly refreshing at the same time.

Looking forward to reading “Death 2”. :-)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
OrangeOreos (LoA)

Elsha, you pulled the Hitler card! Very dark, but a little funny at the same time. A very unexpected twist!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
The Fantastic Mister Fish

i can relate to the pessimism thing.
i take it this is set in Nazi Germany?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
The Fantastic Mister Fish

i can relate to the pessimism thing.
i take it this is set in Nazi Germany?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Alexa Reed (LoA)

I like the twist. Everyone tries to imagine killing Hitler when he was a cute, sweet little baby. This is much better, because he was a down-on-his-luck artist, and it would have been a lot easier to kill him rather than the baby.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Nancy

Wow… quite the twist AND you have Hitler in a German bar as a woman. Props!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Nancy

sorry, I meant WITH a woman… not AS a woman.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Xanathael

Nice hitler twist, with a hint of ‘what woulda happened if’. Nicely done!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

wow this was a little bit of a brain teaser there it hit me with an okey doke
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Clotifoth

Heh, so death is a Nazi? Kind of a bit of irony there that the one time Death has tried to save one’s life, it led to the Holocaust xD

It’s a bit jarring, but a decent transition from the previous ones. Everything before the flashback was the transition of tone that was pretty nice.

Also, IT HAS A SEQUEL?!? :D
- Posted about 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

wow i wrote this so long ago. yeah it just came out, ironic as it is..
- Posted about 10 years ago.