This is based off the picture of a boy who hears for the first time. I tried to capture his expression: http://tinyurl.com/haroldwhittles

Hmm, sounds. This could turn out well. I can’t wait to see where you take it. Nice use of adjectives.

great sequel Stovohobo.
I decided to add a take too…

Great bit of story, and that last line just had a great feel to it. Nice catch making the spoken words sound like foreign gibberish to him.

Nice, pretty big challenge to explore the idea of sound from a perspective with no previous frame of reference.