haha! yayyy! I’m excited! Finally we can start this! Am I next?
IT’S A LOVE STORY BABY JUST SAY YES hmm do i sense a hint of foreshadowing actually probably not =]
Yay! I’m delighted with the beginning.
You change persons about halfway through – from third person to first, that is – but otherwise, I’m excited to see where this goes! :)
Oh wait, oh wait. Just kidding, you don’t change persons. I just read things wrong. Sorry! :D