I think “I have now lost my brother. I have now lost my breakfast” is a fantastic paragraph.

Bad Spot! Bad! Spit out Algie this instant!

lol, very entertaining use of the line. :)

I now feel, in all sorts of ways I cannot begin to express, adequately…Unclean… LOL best line. I lurved this story [wraps computer monitor in arms and coos] awww. cute little slimy ectoplasmmm. Who’s a little toaster orifice? you are, You are.

Ectoplasym….i like that word! hee hee
Thanx for participating in my first challenge!

I loved the last two lines. BRAVO! says in sing-song voice

Great fun, and yeah, the last line is definitely a keeper! (found via the random story link @ the bottom).