is this a flashback of the same person in the previous story, or just another tale written in the same style? Either way, it has a quick ending, one that leaves me asking, what just happened? Did he wake only to feel pain or was he remembering and finally ‘crossing over’ to the white light?
It is meant to follow the same person immediately following the prequel story, but it doesn’t quite work. The truck was meant as a bit of mild black comedy. It worked in my head, just not on the page. Never mind. It’ll make my other stories look better! ;-)
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Petros
Radical Yellow Duck