This was written for my school’s writing club. It was inspired by the Fast Fiction Challenge (http://budgie-uk.livejournal.com/1005061.html)… a great idea. Someone in the club gave me the title (Sky is Over) and a word – reminiscence – for the story. The final twist has been left out here… it had too many characters. :)

Have fun.

Just…. beautiful :)

Thanks. :)

I liked some of the phrasing here (I believe you used “paradise of pure geology”, which I thought was neat).

Perhaps my only bug was in this phrase here: “watching the sun slowly pouring into the sky” It works as-is, but to me it felt just a smidgen clunky; perhaps “pour” could replace “pouring”? More of a taste thing than anything, so feel free to ignore it.

You’re right! “Pour” really sounds better… consider it fixed. :)

Thank you.