A good beginning. I like the first person, but I could see this getting grisly (but awesome, because really, that landing craft could be landing anywhere).

Thank you. Yes it could be anywhere. The waves could be from pulsars and the craft could be crashing through space :)

“I think my breakfast wants to say hello again” – Got a chuckle out of me with that line. A nice bit of levity in what could be a serious story.

hehe, yes i think I needed to put a little humour in there. I noticed all my fic’s were very dark. More humour on the way hehe :) Thank you for taking time to read :)