A bit confusing, maybe cause I didn’t read the prequels. Feels very dramatic though.

Yeah, it needs to be followed from the first one, really as all 4 fit together. Thanks for reading, though.

You cheater…breaking up a bigger story into little parts…

laughing

But still your writing is good good goodly. Stories about relationships (aren’t all stories about relationships of some sort?) really make me interested, as we are such diverse and complex creatures, we humans. You write a nice piece(s).

Thank you! Your feedback is always so encouraging.

And yes, I guess some ideas take more to execute than others. One has to bend the rules for one’s art sometimes!