Quick little story with a lot of random bits thrown in. Not sure what to make of it, but nicely written all the same.

Haha! It was a challenge.

yeah the bonnet is my fault.. lol
great use of the five things! I was thinking about sports when i saw the word volley too..

Oh, it was one of those ‘five word’ challenges. I should really be better about looking over at that corner of the screen.

good thinking i like the way that you used the five things and this is a good entry

Thanks mjy.

I didn’t realize that it was a challenge at first either. You did a great job making that so cohesive — I loved the part about the sister. It was always things like that distracting me on the field.

thanks!