One day we’ll hopefully fight wars with armies of rich white men in business suits armed to the teeth with machine guns. Neat little story. “The boy, for it…” line needs a little reworking, it’s a bit awkward at the moment.

I do agree with Ronnie about the slight awkwardness of the line, but I also enjoyed the style in which it was written—it reminded me of Major Major and Colonel Cathcart in Catch-22.

good story

I love what this snippet sheds light on. Right now we may be fighting armies and tyranny, but someday “soon we’ll be fighting for human rights, and against human extermination in the face of intelligent ‘life’ that we created.” My friend said this once and now I know no other way to describe it. Excellent subject PB.