Love, love, love that there’s a sense of what came before and what’s coming next… and, I must say, I don’t think they’re waiting until the third date!

I actually hadn’t decided what would come next. I just adored that final image so much, I wanted to stay there forever

mmm, i like stories with heels!

That final image is so good I don’t want to write a sequel… I’ve got to take the plunge and write one at some point… but I don’t know if I can keep your momentum up.

I think you can, from everything I’ve seen, when you just write, it works
I can’t wait to see where you go from this moment

still pondering…

so much thinking…
For me, writing is more like what kerouac called ‘spontaneous writing’. Like dancing. I don’t know what I’m doing, I just have a couple moves I want to make sure I include. They provide the tiny bit of structure I improvise on.
(which isn’t to say I don’t go back and edit, but the first stuff out, for me, needs my head to stay out of its way)

I love Jenny’s overly confident, in-your-face type attitude, and I love how enchanting that makes her. I agree with Nancy, great imagry.