Wow…I think it’s the conversational tone that gets me the most. Like he could just shrug and say he doesn’t have a problem in the next sentence.

woe this is some sick twisted material. do you have a probation officer someone should call him.awesome writing

this is really really disturbing. horrid subject material, but well written.

I think the other people in the room might leave when they realize their problems pale in comparison.

Makes me wonder how his son died. Very disturbing.

Disturbing, tragic, and completely plausible.
Happens far too often. I agree, also, that it is the tone that makes this piece. Well done.

It’s the matter-of-factness that makes this one so chilling. It shows how something with such dramatic and complex repercussions can unfold so simply, so easily.