if I can suggest…I’d have her prettying up more, or getting ready more intently (psychologically, or what have you), being critical, worrying, you know…the kind of thing you do before going to the coffee shop where you know THEY will be
I was going to have her adjusting her boobs and doing a few other things but then I wasn’t sure if that would be over the top. Work is already out of control and I’m just sitting on my couch, but I’m hoping to have time to shut the door and take a little break to rework this. Keep the feedback a’comin’!! THANKS!
I’ll be waiting :) Btw, it really is all about the emotion (not that there’s anything wrong with boobs). I think you want to keep in mind the first line or two from School Bus. About ‘trying on’ and such. That really set nicole in my mind
Jeez, now I have to figure out where to take this. Hopefully my sleep deprived brain will freeassociate all night until i get something. I’m tempted to just work backwards, I really like the hair pulling scene as an ender, but it is also so enticing to think about where that might lead
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