Hmm… I had thought that All Along the Watchtower was Hendrix, but a little research shows it was a cover. I only worry about the accuracy of lyrics and that the Dylan version “was recorded by the artist as a quiet three-chord Folk song.” (Wikipedia) But that’s basically splitting hairs.

Real critique: seam vs. seem, scotch becomes cognac, and other small technical stuff. Overall: The Americans come around to save the day again. I hope they hit a snag. Haha

the scotch was different than the cognac. The Americans were looting instead of saving. well maybe they were liberating the loot.

oh yeah and hendrix and dylan both recorded that song with an electric rickenbocker guitar
but its hard to hear that on wikkpedia