This is nice, Moonshine…is it based on fact?

I like your style of composition, the way you break the sentences and structure them to be read. Thisis something I myself often have difficulty with.

You asked for a rating in your bio, so I’ll give you one. Just so you know, I don’t have anything against your poem at all, but I give 5s to pieces that greatly impress me…I was still impressed by yours, and a 4 is a good rating ok…

I’m gonna watch you.

Strictly fiction, scratch, and glad you liked it.
I wrote it in about two minutes as some random inspiration hit – so a 4 is more than enough to satisfy me!

wow i really dig this you rock you are like dr seusses love child