It’s just me.. but.. this seems a lot like Gwen and Paul.. does it not?

I like this very much. The relationship between the two characters is really interesting, I want to see what happens next.

Very nice. I like the body language and the way that Max gets a little more imposing as the story progresses.

ooh i like this. it makes it seem like something bad is going to happen. and you get the hint at how there relationship usually is.

@E. L. D.: you’ll just have to see about that one. (-;

@Everbody else: glad you guys like thus far! Now, let’s see what mi amigo has to add…