austrailian drinking song? sailor chantey? lol how happy-go-lucky and yet the use of never and ever is.. clever.
I like the rhythm.
The subject was interesting. I formed a mental image of the “land down under” as being deep underwater, perhaps in a graveyard of sunken ships. It’s hard to write a poem with rhyme and meter, and it sounds like you stretched a bit to make this one work.
The subject was interesting. I formed a mental image of the “land down under” as being deep underwater, perhaps in a graveyard of sunken ships.
It’s hard to write a poem with rhyme and meter, and it sounds like you stretched a bit to make this one work.
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