Very nice interpretation of the challenge. I enjoyed the gruffness of Jimmy, in contrast with Jon’s supposed upbeat attitude.
I would most certainly like to see more of this.

Very clever. Made me laugh.

groan… Lovely ending. Excellent set up. I am curious to know what ward they are in – my brain says mental – and if their unusual names played a part in getting them there.

Good descriptions on Jimmy. If you’d had a little more you could have given us a bit more on Jon, other than his being young (and bandaged wrists, nice touch).

Nicely done.

So much to say, so few characters! :-)

lol cute one.
Bandaged wrists could mean so many things. I saw a kid at my pediatritian’s office with two bandaged wrists and one arm in a sling. My imagination ran wild.